First group critique

This group critique was something new for me and it was honestly very helpful. It allowed my classmates to share their ideas with me in order to make my essay better which was just what i needed. learned from my group what their hobbies were along with their journey into learning to write. for example one of my group members had creative writing influence their writing which i can also relate to. Now with all the ideas i have gathered from my group i will add it to my essay so it can continue to catch their attention and allow my essay to be better.