First Group Critique

      I used to do the same activity at my English class in high school, my teacher would put us to work on group about our essays or research paper. My classmates would give me three to four good comments, just like they would give me three to four suggestions of what should i change. I particularly find this activity very helpful because i have the opportunity to change many things with my classmates suggestions.
what i learn from my classmates witting was that, each person has their own way of write. and that there is not perfection before some works and drafts.